E-VILLAGE!

On Thursday 9th May we went to the E-Village in Gisborne and learnt about all the gisborne electricity. We got to go on E scooter and to use robots and also these challenge, they was a big wire and if you touched it then it beep sound that means you  to restart.

I was super happy because I made it through and I got a lollipop. I learnt how most of our electricity comes from our water electricity plants around gisborne and the electricity is formed because of the power of the water crashing to make electricity.

We went there to find out about electricity and I learnt a lot.We got there by driving to the Tairawhiti Museum and walked to the E Village. We went to the E Village to learn electricity and to have fun.

Writing

In my writing group we have been learning how to make quality writing by using steps to succeed. The first part of expert writer is to plan out your writing, to have a brain storm. To have some words to help doing your writing. After you think that you enough words to help during your writing.

Now you start writing and during your writing make sure to make it descriptive and also use your brain storm to during your writing. To make it a R5 in the rubric, use paragraphs in you writing have a lot of information in your writing to describe it better.

On the writing rubric for me, Ideas R4 and for Vocab R4 and for Spelling R4. I hope you guys can improve in your writing from this blog post.